Talk:Twilight Assault/Preview

Good preview, but a couple quick suggestions - first off I would try to include a couple screenshots demonstrating some of the new mechanics, such as the ooze and fire parts, just to help clarify. Second I would also have somebody do a proofread before submitting it. There are a few places with run-ons that are very difficult to follow. Otherwise like I said, it's a nice spoiler-free preview of what's to come in the dungeon, and definitely helps you feel ready for the first time you go inside. 50.148.82.239 16:33, 1 October 2013 (UTC)

Pictures are on the way ^^ --Landon144 (talk) 16:44, 1 October 2013 (UTC)