User talk:Chadarian/Engineer

This is an awesome read! I like how the character story is integrated with the actual personal story. I like it. --Xu Davella 21:39, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Wow, thank you! Even though I write these mostly for my own sake I'm glad anyone else liked it ^^ I'm not throughly satisfied with the wording of the end paragraphs. I'll probably name the escorted nobleman (because I don't like repeating the anonymous words "ward" and "nobleman", it makes him sound so insignificant) and extend the dialogue between Chadlock and Terry, explaining what Chadlock is doing there in the first place (I don't like loose ends). Chad 23:11, 18 October 2011 (UTC)